Personal Statement: Top 10 Rules and Pitfalls

From Top 10 Rules and Pitfalls // Purdue Writing Lab

Strive for depth rather than breadth. Narrow focus to one or two key themes, ideas or experiences
Try to tell the reader something that no other applicant will be able to say
Provide the reader with insight into what drives you
Be yourself, not the ‘ideal’ applicant
Get creative and imaginative in the opening remarks, but make sure it’s something that no one else could write
Address the school’s unique features that interest you
Focus on the affirmative in the personal statement; consider an addendum to explain deficiencies or blemishes
Evaluate experiences, rather than describe them
Proofread carefully for grammar, syntax, punctuation, word usage, and style
Use readable fonts, typeface, and conventional spacing and margins

Do not submit an expository resume; avoid repeating information found elsewhere on the application
Do not use the same personal statement for each application. Generic statements are often obvious
Do not preach to your reader. You can express opinions, but do not come across as fanatical or extreme
Do not talk about money as a motivator
Do not discuss systemic and social injustices simply as complaints, but as a relevant source of motivation for your overall goals and intended studies
Do not remind the school of its rankings or tell them how good they are
Do not use boring clichéd intros or conclusions
- “Allow me to introduce myself. My name is…”
- “This question asks me to discuss…”
- “I would like to thank the admissions committee for considering my application.”
- “It is my sincere hope that you will grant me the opportunity to attend your fine school.”
- “In sum, there are three reasons why you should admit me…”
Do not use unconventional and gimmicky formats and packages
Do not submit supplemental materials unless they are requested
Do not get the name of the school wrong
Do not incorporate technical language or very uncommon words

Stewart, Mark Alan. Perfect Personal Statements. New York: Simon & Schuster Macmillan, 1996.